Hoqalo The Broken System
They've been drinking my future like it's corp-subsidized coffee. I'm about to make them choke on it.
I'm Dash. My great-grandfather was one of the Fifteen who saved humanity during the System Apocalypse, founding the corps that rule the solar system. That legacy should've been mine. Until my father was caught up in corpo politics, disinherited and died, leaving us with nothing but a single building on Earth 2.0.
They stole my future. Time to steal it back with interest.
What to expect
Deep System mechanics with a twist — a broken System with glitchy stats and magic.
A corporate dystopia on Earth 2.0 where ancient magic and futuristic tech collide.
The world still exploits people — the tone refuses to. Wit over despair.
A mystery wrapped around the Sol Fortune 15, family legacies, and secret sabotage.
A disinherited heir clawing up from the bottom with tools, friends, and terrible puns.
Natural chemistry with a twist. Present, not the point. No harem.
The series
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A disinherited heir of the Fifteen manifests a broken System and the Hoqalo trait — a tinkerer's gift that forges gear far above its tier — and starts clawing his legacy back from the corps that buried his family.
Dash's broken System wasn't a glitch — it was targeted sabotage. As he finally unlocks his real power, the solar system spirals into chaos and his estranged family lines him up as a deniable asset for an illegal black-op.
Release schedule
3× a week — Tue / Thu / Sat, 20:00 CET
+ 1 bonus chapter each week on Patreon, currently ~300 pages ahead.